1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-03-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 exo 내 용 Today I will talk about idol EXO. I love their many songs. Lucky one, peter pan, monster, lotto, love me right and artificial lover. My favorite song of EXO is Lucky one. I knew this music in school's concert. Next, I like peter pan. I knew this music today in youtube. It's lyrics is very good. I hope I can heard exo's good songs more. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-03-20 답변내용 Today I will talk about idol EXO. (missing comma) >>Today, I will talk about idol EXO. I love their many songs. (correct order of words) >>I love many of their songs. Lucky one, peter pan, monster, lotto, love me right and artificial lover. (correct letters) >>Lucky One, Peter Pan, Monster, Lotto, Love me Right and Artificial Love. My favorite song of EXO is Lucky one. (correct letter 'One') >> ACCEPTED << >>My favorite song of EXO is Lucky One. I knew this music in school's concert. (correct verb 'heard') >> ACCEPTED << >>I heard this music in school's concert. Next, I like peter pan. (correct letter 'Peter Pan') >>Next, I like Peter Pan. I knew this music today in youtube. (correct choices of words/ correct letter 'YouTube') >>I saw this song today on YouTube. It's lyrics is very good. (correct pronoun 'Its') >>Its lyrics is very good. I hope I can heard exo's good songs more. (correct verb 'hear') >>I hope I can hear Exo's good songs more. *NOTE : 1) Study the corrections. 2) Follow the corrections made. 3) Use the correct words. 4) Use a capital letter on proper noun. WRONG : south korea CORRECT : South Korea WRONG : girls' generation CORRECT : Girls' Generation ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, Of course you will hear and see videos of Exo's new songs more. Do they have a website? Perhaps you could get a latest update about the group. Or even send them a message via Facebook. Do you have a Facebook account? I wonder why EXO. There are many K-Pop bands, but what did you really like about EXO? Let's dance, Teacher Mea