1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-03-09 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 middle school's subject 내 용 Today I will talk about middle school's projects. First, there is Korean, math, society, science, English. Also, we study art, music, P.E and ethics. We already studied these subject in elemntary school. Next, sports, career is newly appeared. Sports is just playing sports game. Finally, career is studying career. I hope new subjects are fun. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-03-10 답변내용 Today I will talk about middle school's projects. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I will talk about middle school's projects. First, there is Korean, math, society, science, English. (correct letter of proper noun) >> First, there is Korean, Math, Society, Science, and English. Also, we study art, music, P.E and ethics. (correct letter of proper noun) >> Also, we studied Art, Music, P.E., and Ethics. We already studied these subject in elemntary school. (correct noun ‘subjects’/ correct spelling ‘elementary’) >> We already studied these subjects in elementary school. Next, sports, career is newly appeared. (correct choices of words) >>Next, sports and career were newly added. Sports is just playing sports game. (missing preposition ‘about’) >>Sports is just about playing sports game. Finally, career is studying career. (correct choices of words) >>Finally, career will be all about finding the right jobs. I hope new subjects are fun. (missing article ‘the’) >> I hope the new subjects are fun. *NOTE : 1) Study the corrections made. 2) Observe the correct choices of words. 3) Check the correct spelling. 4) Use capital letters on proper noun : WRONG : science CORRECT : Science 5) Use capital letter on the title : WRONG : middle school's subject CORRECT : Middle School's Subjects ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, I think Sports subject would be very fun. Because you will have more time to play aside from PE class. I’m pretty sure that you will like the new subjects included. I wonder what day will you have Sports and Career subjects. Waiting, Teacher Mea