1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-03-09 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 homework 내 용 Today I will talk about my homework from school and academy. First, I have chinese homework from school. I have to write 30 chinese words for 10 times. Second, I have math homework from academy. I have to solve 40 math questions. Finally, I have Englilsh homework. I should listen 4 storys, memorize 90 words and study grammer. I hope my homework become less than now. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-03-10 답변내용 Today I will talk about my homework from school and academy. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I will talk about my homework from school and academy. First, I have chinese homework from school. (correct letter ‘Chinese’) >> First, I have Chinese homework. I have to write 30 chinese words for 10 times. (correct letter ‘Chinese’) >> I have to write 30 Chinese words for 10 times. Second, I have math homework from academy. (missing article ‘the’/ correct order of words) >> Second, I have math homework from the academy. >> Second, I have math academy homework. I have to solve 40 math questions. >> CORRECT << Finally, I have Englilsh homework. (correct spelling ‘English’) >>Finally, I have English homework. I should listen 4 storys, memorize 90 words and study grammer. (correct spelling ‘stories’, ‘grammar’) >> I should listen to 4 stories, memorize 90 words, and study grammar. I hope my homework become less than now. (missing modal verb) >> I hope my homework will become less than now. *NOTE : 1) Study the corrections. 2) Follow the corrections made. 3) Choose the correct words. 4) Check the correct spelling. 5)Identify the correct usage of words (eg. noun, pronoun, verb, etc.). 6) Proper noun should start in capital letter. 7) Start with a capital letter on the title : WRONG : homework CORRECT : Homework ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, Thank you for writing in your diary. Learning Chinese language is great. I actually consider to learn an Asian language, but I heard that Japanese language is easier than Chinese. Do you think so, too? Solving 40 math problems is like solving the world’s problem. That’s okay. It will surely sharpen your mind solving them. I hope that you will always enjoy doing homework. Smile, Teacher Mea