1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-02-22 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Pocketmon rating 내 용 Today I will talk about Pocketmon game. In Pocketmon game, there is good system. It can make us battle with person in another country. I also use it too. In rating, there is ranking. I not good at rating so I am not in ranking now. There are many person who is good at rating in korea. I am following Jeong Hun. In season 1, he won 5th prize. I think he is very good at rating and strategy. I hope I can be in ranking. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-02-22 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Nice one! You are enjoying Pokémon game so that means another exciting activity for you. About the diary, please compare your sentences with the correct ones and try to learn from them. I know you can do better just like how you want to get better in Pokémon game! Have a good day! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about Pocketmon game. *** Today, I will talk about the Pokémon game. In Pocketmon game, there is good system. *** The game has a good scheme. It can make us battle with person in another country. *** We can have a match with people from other countries. I also use it too. *** I also use it. or I use it too. In rating, there is ranking. -correct- I not good at rating so I am not in ranking now. *** I am not good at it yet so I am not in ranking now. There are many person who is good at rating in korea. *** There are many people who are good at rating in Korea. I am following Jeong Hun. -correct- In season 1, he won the 5th prize. I think he is very good at rating and strategy. *** I think he has a very good strategy at rating. I hope I can be in ranking. -correct-