1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-02-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 present 내 용 Today I will talk about what I get on graduation day. First, I had some money from school. It is because I did nice job in school. It was fifty thousand one. Second, I get a new bag. I like black color so my mother bought black bag for me. I love new bag. Third, I get transportation card to go to middle school. Middle school is little far so I need a transportation card. I think I got many things when I graduate. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-02-20 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I am sure you are so happy receiving them. Please spend your money wisely too. Your written work is improve but remember how to use the articles 'a, an and the' on some of your sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about what I get on graduation day. *** Today, I will talk about what I received on my Graduation day. First, I had some money from school. -correct- It is because I did a nice job in school. -correct- It was fifty thousand one. *** It was \50,000. Second, I get a new bag. *** Second, I got a new bag. I like black color so my mother bought a black bag for me. -correct- I love new bag. *** I love my new bag. Third, I get transportation card to go to middle school. *** Third, I got a transportation card to go to Middle school. Middle school is a little far so I need a transportation card. -correct- I think I got many things when I graduate. *** I think I got many things on my graduation.