1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-02-08 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 ID 내 용 Today I will talk about my ID. I have many IDs. First, I have my naver ID. I made it on 2016 October. I also use this ID to play maplestory. I can play maplestory by this naver ID. Second I have my Kakaotalk ID. I use messages many times so I made Kakaotalk ID. I made it on 2014 Agust. Third, I have my facebook ID. I typed that I was 15 years old because when I type 13 years old, I can't use facebook because there is age restriction. So I will make newly when I became 15. I think there is so many IDs needed in the world. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-02-08 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Your sentences are better in this diary. Keep it up and please study the corrections. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ****************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about my ID. *** Today I will talk about my IDs. I have many IDs. -correct- First, I have my Naver ID. -correct- I made it on 2016 October. *** I made it on October 2016. I also use this ID to play Maplestory. -correct- Second I have my Kakaotalk ID. -correct- I use messages many times so I made Kakaotalk ID. *** I send messages a lot of times so I made Kakaotalk ID. I made it on 2014 Agust. *** I made it on August 2014. Third, I have my facebook ID. -correct- I typed that I was 15 years old because when I type 13 years old, I can't use Facebook because there is age restriction. -correct- So I will make newly when I became 15. *** So I will make a new one when I turn 15. I think there is so many IDs needed in the world. *** I think there are so many IDs needed in the world.