1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-02-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 classmates 내 용 Today I will talk about my academy's classmate "Gwoneunjun". He went to Philippines because he win a English goldenbell. For the prize, he can go to philippines. He went to philippines at January 4th and he came back on January 25th. His voice sounds different and he became taller. I think when he went to philippines, his puberty came. My puberty is already come. I want to be taller. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-02-03 답변내용 Hi Daniel! It is nice that you shared about your classmate in the diary. I hope you will have the chance to visit the Philippines too. Please continue to study the corrections to get better with your written work. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************************* Today I will talk about my academy's classmate "Gwoneunjun". *** Today I will talk about my classmate in the academy whose name is Gwoneunjun. He went to Philippines because he win a English goldenbell. For the prize, he can go to philippines. *** He went to the Philippines as his prize for winning English Goldenbell. He went to philippines at January 4th and he came back on January 25th. *** He left on January 4th and came back on January 25th. His voice sounds different and he became taller. -correct- I think when he went to philippines, his puberty came. *** I think his puberty came when he went to the Philippines. My puberty is already come. *** My puberty came already. I want to be taller. -correct-