1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-02-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 New years day 내 용 Today I will talk about what I did on new year's day. On Thursday, I went to grandparents' house and I take a rest in grandparents' house. My mother cooked vegetable pancakes. Tomorrow, I had memorial service. My father can't come on ceremony because he had a work. After ceremony, my familes met our relatives. We went to hot springs and we went to shopping mall. Also, me and my cousin saw the movie "Combination". It was really fun. I think actor is very good at action. He was very strong and he can use gun very well. I hope second episode open. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-02-02 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good work in expressing clear idea in the diary. However, some of your sentences had grammar lapses so please study the corrections. know you can do better. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************************* Today I will talk about what I did on new year's day. -correct- On Thursday, I went to grandparents' house and I take a rest in grandparents' house. *** We went to my grandparents' house on Thursday and took a rest there. My mother cooked vegetable pancakes. -correct- Tomorrow, I had memorial service. *** We had a memorial service on the next day. My father can't come on ceremony because he had a work. *** My father can't come to the ceremony because of his work. After ceremony, my familes met our relatives. *** After the ceremony, my family met our other relatives. We went to hot springs and we went to shopping mall. *** We went to a hot spring then to the shopping mall. Also, me and my cousin saw the movie "Combination". -correct- It was really fun. -correct- I think the actor is very good at action movies. -correct- He was very strong and he can use gun very well. -correct- I hope second episode open. *** I hope there will be a second episode.