1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-01-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 pocket monster 내 용 Today I will talk about pocket moster game and animation. In pocket monster animation, Jiwoo is main character and he travels the world and found out new pocketmons. I didn't watch animations so I don't know. I think animations is not funny. But pocketmonster game is very fun. In that game, we travels and become champion. And we can fight with other person. We have to use our brain to win the game. I play this with my cousins but I always lose. I think my cousins are more smart than me. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-01-20 답변내용 Hi Daniel! You have shown improvement in your written work. Please continue to study the corrected sentences to keep getting better. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ****************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about pocket moster game and animation. *** Today, I will talk about Pocket Monster game and animation. In pocket monster animation, Jiwoo is main character and he travels the world and found out new pocketmons. *** In pocket monster animation, Jiwoo is the main character and he travels the world and found out new pocketmons. I didn't watch animations so I don't know. -correct- I think animations is not funny. *** I think animations are not funny. But pocket monster game is very fun. -correct- In that game, we travels and become champion. *** In that game, we travel and become a champion. And we can fight with other person. -correct- We have to use our brain to win the game. -correct- I play this with my cousins but I always lose. -correct- I think my cousins are more smart than me. *** I think my cousins are smarter than me.