1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-12-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 striker 내 용 Today I will talk about my new Maplestory character striker. Striker is pirate. He has strong power and he use knuckle. He use shark and sea's power. He use his magic power and make his fist look like shark or tornado. He can make electric hit. I will promote striker until it became 200 level. 250 level is max level so when I make it 200 level, I think I feel satisfy. I will use my all game money into striker because we need better weapon. I hope I can make many strong weapon. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-12-23 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I am now curious about Striker. I can relate to your diary because it reminds me how I enjoyed playing video games in my childhood days. The thought on your sentences is clear but look into the corrected ones to know how to write them better. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************************* Today I will talk about my new MapleStory character striker. *** Today I will talk about my new Maple Story character, Striker. Striker is pirate. *** Striker is a pirate. He has strong power and he use knuckle. *** He has strong power and uses knuckle. He use shark and sea's power. *** He uses shark and sea power. He use his magic power and make his fist look like shark or tornado. *** He uses his magic power and he will look like a shark or tornado at first. He can make electric hit. -correct- I will promote striker until it became 200 level. *** I will promote Striker until I reach the 200 level. 250 level is max level so when I make it 200 level, I think I feel satisfy. *** The highest level is 250 so I will feel satisfied when I reach the 200 level. I will use my all game money into striker because we need better weapon. *** I will use all of my game money into Striker because we need better weapons. I hope I can make many strong weapon. *** I hope I can make many strong weapons.