1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-11-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 plants vs zombie 내 용 Today I will talk about game "Plants VS Zomies". One man eat some hambergur with special source. He want to try it again. But it was very far away and there were many zombies in a way. He fought with zombies with his strong plants. It is like strategy game. It is very easy. I think many people can try it and have some fun. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-11-30 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good work in this diary. There were more correct sentences that you made. However, please pay attention to the corrections and see how can they be written correctly. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about game "Plants VS Zombies". -correct- One man eat some hambergur with special source. *** A man ate some hamburger with a special sauce. He want to try it again. *** He wants to try it again. But it was very far away and there were many zombies in a way. *** But it was very far away and there were many zombies along the way. He fought with zombies with his strong plants. -correct- It is like strategy game. -correct- It is very easy. -correct- I think many people can try it and have some fun. -correct-