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2016-11-28
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Today I will talk about Gimjang. Gimjang is Kimchi making process. It is not hard. We need cabbage and gochujang. We just coat gochujang on cabbage. I don't know exactly but we need some other season too. Our parents did it yesterday. My father give me kimchi during he was doing Gimjang. But he give oyster with it so I don't want to eat. I don't like oyster. I think gimjang is hard to do.
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Hi Daniel! Good job in writing more grammatically correct sentences. Keep up the good work! Have a good evening! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today, I will talk about Gimjang. -correct- Gimjang is Kimchi making process. -correct- It is not hard. -correct- We need cabbage and gochujang. -correct- We just coat gochujang on cabbage. -correct- I don't know exactly but we need some other season too. *** I don't know exactly but we need some other seasonings or spices too. Our parents did it yesterday. -correct- My father give me kimchi during he was doing Gimjang. *** My father gave me kimchi while he was doing Gimjang. But he give oyster with it so I don't want to eat. *** But he put oyster sauce on it so I don't want to eat it. I don't like oyster. -correct- I think Gimjang is hard to do. -correct-