1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-11-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 my cellphone 내 용 Today I will talk about my cellphone. My cellphone is Galaxy Note 3. I don't know this is good or bad cellphone. My cellphone is little strange. It go out even though it had enough battery and it become very hot when I use it for short times. I had seven knights, special soldier on my cellphone now. I hope my phones battery problem become solve. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-11-25 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in presenting clear thoughts on your sentences. However, please use the articles like 'a', 'an' and 'the' when they are needed on the sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************8 Today I will talk about my cellphone. *** Today, I will talk about my cellphone. My cellphone is Galaxy Note 3. -correct- I don't know this is good or bad cellphone. *** I don't know if this is a good or bad cellphone My cellphone is a little strange. -correct- It go out even though it had enough battery and it become very hot when I use it for short times. *** It shuts off event though it had enough battery and it becomes very hot when I use for short period. I had seven knights, special soldier on my cellphone now. -correct- I hope my phones battery problem become solve. *** I hope my problem with the phone battery will be solved.