1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-11-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 my room 내 용 Today I will talk about my room. In my room there is many things. There is two bookshelves and two desks, one big bed, and my bag. Also, there is things that I can rest with. Cellphone, computer and earphone. There is things that I can study with. Pencils, lots of book. Finally there is perse and puzzle is on my desks. I hope I can get rid of this lots of book. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-11-23 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I was able to understand your thoughts in the diary. However, please try to study how two ideas can be put in one, long sentence in order to avoid fragments. I know that you can learn things better. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ****************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about my room. *** I will talk about my room today. In my room there is many things. *** There are many things in my room. There is two bookshelves and two desks, one big bed, and my bag. *** There are two bookshelves and two desks, one big bed, and my bag. Also, there is things that I can rest with Cellphone, computer and earphone *** Also, there are things that I can use while resting like cellphone, computer, and earphone. There is things that I can study with.Pencils, lots of book. *** There are things that I can study with like pencils and lots of books. Finally there is perse and puzzle is on my desks. *** Finally, there is a purse and a puzzle on my desk. I hope I can get rid of this lots of book. *** I hope I can rid of these books.