1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-11-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 pocket money 내 용 Today I will talk about my pocket money. My pocket money was 2000 won but my mom change it to 3000 won because she think it is too little for me. My mom think about 5000 won now. I think it is too many for me. My mom usually forgot to give me the pocket money. I hope she wouldn't forget from now on. I get pocket mony on Monday. I think I have to say to my mom that I must have pocket money today. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-11-21 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I like your subject in this diary. Good job in coming up with a nice topic. About the sentences, the ideas conveyed were clear but please be careful with minor grammar lapses. Have a good evening! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about my pocket money. *** Today, I will talk about my pocket money. My pocket money was 2000 won but my mom change it to 3000 won because she think it is too little for me. *** My pocket money used to be 2000 won but my mom changed it to 3000 won because she thinks it is too little for me. My mom think about 5000 won now. *** My mom is thinking about giving me 5000 won now. I think it is too many for me. *** I think it is too much for me. My mom usually forgot to give me the pocket money. *** My mom usually forgets to give my pocket money. I hope she wouldn't forget from now on. -correct- I get my pocket money on Monday. -correct- I think I have to say to my mom that I must have pocket money today. -correct-