1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-11-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 grandfather's birthday 내 용 Today I went to my grandparents' house. Because today is my grandfather's birthday. Our family went to grandparents' house and cooked a food. I studied for 1 hour and played smartphone games. Finally, relatives came and we had a dinner. I was too boring until I went to the house. I am so disappointed that my birthday was passed. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-11-14 답변내용 Hi Daniel! It's good to know that your grandfather just had his birthday. How old is he now? I hope you did some fun games on his birthday so everyone will have a good time. About the diary, I noticed that your sentences are getting better. Good job! However, please try not to start your sentence with the word 'because'. Remember that 'because' is a conjunction which is used as connectors between words, phrases, clauses, or sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ****************************************************************************************************************************** Today I went to my grandparents' house. -correct- Because today is my grandfather's birthday. *** It is my grandfather's birthday. Our family went to my grandparents' house and cooked a food. -correct- I studied for 1 hour and played smartphone games. -correct- Finally, relatives came and we had a dinner. -correct- I was too boring until I went to the house. *** I was too bored until we went back to the house. I am so disappointed that my birthday was passed. *** I am so disappointed that my birthday had passed.