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school
2017-11-14
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league of legend
2017-11-11
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The largest chocolate bar
2017-11-07
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changing academy
2017-11-04
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micheal phelps vs great white shark
2017-08-24
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kakao talk
2017-08-10
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youtube
2017-08-06
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league of legend
2017-08-01
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Haikyu
2017-07-20
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school uniform
2017-06-11
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Today I will talk about what songs I listen. First, I litsen Maroon 5's music. Maroon 5's musics is usually exciting and music's sounds is very good. Second, I listen sam smith's music. It is usually slow but exciting either. Finally, I listen suicide squad's music. Suicide squad is movie. But it's ost is very good. I will found more exciting musics.
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Hi Daniel! Your subject in today's diary is interesting. I love listening to different kinds of music too! Good idea in your written work but please review the corrected sentences and apply them next time. Have a good evening! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about what songs I listen. *** Today, I will talk about the songs that I listen to. First, I litsen Maroon 5's music. *** First, I listen to Maroon 5's music. Maroon 5's musics is usually exciting and music's sounds is very good. *** Maroon 5's music is usually exciting and the melody is very good. Second, I listen sam smith's music. *** Second, I listen to Sam Smith's music. It is usually slow but exciting either. -correct- Finally, I listen suicide squad's music. *** Finally, I listen to the music of the movie Suicide Squad. Suicide squad is a nice movie. -correct- But it's ost is very good. *** The original sound tract of the movie is very good. I will found more exciting musics. *** I will look for more exciting songs.