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2016-10-26
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Today I will talk about what I did today. First, I woke up in 7'o clock. I took a shower and studied English. I ate breakfast and went to my school. On Wednesday, school finish more earlier then another days so I did my English homework and played with my friends. I studied English and math at academy. I went home and watch comics. Finally, I went to academy again and studied. I went home and studied for test again. I think my work is playing, studying is all
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Hi Daniel! I can tell the improvements you are making in your written work. Good job and also pay attention to other corrections to minimize errors. Please continue to strive! Have a good evening! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about what I did today. *** I will talk about what I did today. First, I woke up in 7'o clock. *** First, I woke up at 7 o'clock. I took a shower and studied English. -correct- I ate breakfast and went to my school. -correct- On Wednesday, school finish more earlier then another days so I did my English homework and played with my friends. *** Every Wednesday, school finishes much earlier than other days so I did my English homework and played with my friends. I studied English and Math at the academy. I went home and watch comics. *** I went home and watched comics. Finally, I went to academy again and studied. -correct- I went home and studied for test again. -correct- I think my work is playing, studying and that's all.