1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-10-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Mercedes 내 용 Today I will talk about Mercedes. Yesterday, I made a new character in Maplestory. I made Mercedes. It is archer. Mercedes is Elf's king. She fought with bad people. But, she had a curse from black magician and she become very weak. Also, she took a sleep for hundreds of yeras. When she woke up, she train very hard. I will make her 200 level. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-10-17 답변내용 Hi Daniel! The idea you presented in the diary is consistent. Good work! Keep it up and study the corrected sentences to continuously improve. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ******************************************************************************************************************* Today I will talk about Mercedes. -correct- Yesterday, I made a new character in Maple Story. -correct- I made Mercedes. -correct- It is archer. *** She is an archer. Mercedes is Elf's king. *** Mercedes is the King's elf. She fought with bad people. -correct- But, she had a curse from black magician and she become very weak. -correct- Also, she took a sleep for hundreds of years. -correct- When she woke up, she train very hard. *** When she woke up, she trained very hard. I will make her 200 level. *** I will make her in level 200.