1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-10-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Today I will talk about my day. Today, I woke up at 7:15 and I took a shower. Next, I ready to go to school and I went to school and studied. Next, I went to home after school and I played with my friends in my house. I played maplestory in my house. And my friends played shadowfighter and saw internet. I am studying now. I think I have to study very many time to rest again. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-10-14 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Your sentences are improving. Please review the corrections and learn them well. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =========================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about my day. -correct Today, I woke up at 7:15 and I took a shower. -correct- Next, I ready to go to school and I went to school and studied. *** Next I got ready for school to study. Next, I went home after school and I played with my friends in my house. -correct- I played Maple Story in my house. -correct- And my friends played shadow fighter and saw internet. *** My friends played shadow fighter and surfed the internet. I am studying now. -correct- I think I have to study very many time to rest again. *** I think I have to study more then I can rest again.