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Today I will talk about exercise. I don't exercise everyday. I exercise twice a week. I think I have to do it everyday but I don't have a time. So I will do homework in morning. I will wake up in 6'o clock and do my homework. I can't do every homework because math homework is too many. But I will do faster than before. I will exercise today.
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Hi Daniel! Your written work is gradually improving. Good job! Please review the corrected sentences and I hope that you will have extra time everyday to do some exercises. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ***************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about exercise. -correct- I don't exercise everyday. -correct- I exercise twice a week. -correct- I think I have to do it everyday but I don't have time. -correct- So I will do homework in morning. *** So I will do homework in the morning. I will wake up in 6'o clock and do my homework. *** I will wake up at 6'o clock and do my homework. I can't do every homework because math homework is too many. *** I can't do all the homework because there are too many Math homework. But I will do faster than before. -correct- I will exercise today. -correct-