1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-10-05 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 special soldier 내 용 Today I will talk about what I did in a game "Special Soldier". I talked about special soldier. It was a game that we use gun to kill enemies. Our friends made a clan and we fought with another clan. But almost clan is strong so we were foughting hard. I hope we become stronger and we become strong clan. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-10-05 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good improvement in the diary. You were able to apply the past tense of the verb in most of the sentences. Keep it up and review the corrections for today. Have fun! T. Maribel ============================================================================================================================= Today I will talk about what I did in a game "Special Soldier". -correct- I talked about special soldier. *** no need to repeat the sentence *** It was a game that we use gun to kill enemies. *** We use gun to kill enemies in the game. Our friends made a clan and we fought with another clan. -correct- But almost clan is strong so we were foughting hard. *** But most of the clans are strong so we fought really hard. I hope we become stronger and we become strong clan. *** I hope we can become a stronger clan.