1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-09-28 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Today I will talk about my school work. Today I will talk about what we do on our school. First, I went to school and take a walk for a minute. Next, we study for 40 minutes and we have a break time for 10 minutes. I take a walk and play with ball outside. I come to classroom again after break time and we study for 40 minutes again and have a break time for 20 minutes. I take a walk again and play with ball. We study again and rest for 10 minutes. I will take a walk again. Finally we study again and rest for 30 minutes and study 40 minutes and go home. I hope we rest more time than now. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-09-29 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I guess you enjoy taking a walk during your break. Thank you for sharing about the things you do in school. Please always use the past tense of the verb when you are retelling the things that happened to you. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about my school work. Today I will talk about what we do on our school. *** Today, I will talk about my school work and what we do in our school. First, I went to school and take a walk for a minute. *** First, I went to school and took a walk for a minute. Next, we study for 40 minutes and we have a break time for 10 minutes. -correct- I take a walk and play with ball outside. *** I tool a walk again and played with a ball outside. I come to classroom again after break time and we study for 40 minutes again and have a break time for 20 minutes. *** I went inside classroom again after the break time and we studied for 40 minutes and next break was for 20 minutes. I take a walk again and play with ball. *** I took a walk and played with a ball again. We study again and rest for 10 minutes. *** We studied then rested for 10 minutes. I will take a walk again. *** I took a walk again. Finally we study again and rest for 30 minutes and study 40 minutes and go home. *** We studied and rested for 30 minutes, then studied for 40 minutes and went home. I hope we rest more time than now. *** I hope we have more time to rest.