1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-09-09 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 I will play with my friend 내 용 Tomorrow, I will play with my friend. His name is Hwangjongwon. We didn't set a place where we play. But we expect we will play in someone's house or playing a bycycle and play ball game. I like to play outside. We can play games or watching television in house but if we play outside we can play manythings. I will take my cellphone and bycycle and ball if we play outside. If we play in my house, I will watch comic by my computer and play computer games. If we play my friend's house I will play cellphone games. I hope we have a good time tomorrow 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-09-09 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Please review the corrections below. Enjoy your weekend and be safe! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================= Tomorrow, I will play with my friend. His name is Hwangjongwon. -correct- We didn't set a place where we play. *** We didn't set a place where we will play. But we expect we will play in someone's house or playing a bycycle and play ball game. *** But we expect to play in someone's house, ride a bicycle and play a ball game. I like to play outside. -correct- We can play games or watching television in house but if we play outside we can play manythings. *** We can play games and watch television in the house but if we play outside we can enjoy many things. I will take my cellphone and bycycle and ball if we play outside. *** I will take my cellphone, bicycle and ball if we play outside. If we play in my house, I will watch comic by my computer and play computer games. -correct- If we play my friend's house I will play cellphone games. *** If we go to my friend's house, I will play cellphone games. I hope we have a good time tomorrow *** I hope that we will have a good time tomorrow.