1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-09-07 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Today I will talk about what I did. I think I was unluck today. First, I went to school and I didn't do my science homework so I was scold to teacher. Next, I was kicking the ball during I was playing but I fall down. I don't hart but there was a hole in my pants. Third, I almost lost my watch. I left it to my academy and I found it. I hope tomorrow will be good day. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-09-07 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I am sorry to hear about the unfortunate things that happened today. I hope the same thing for you too. Your writing skills are improving gradually. Good work but don't forget to study the corrected sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about what I did. -correct- I think I was unluck today. *** I think I was unlucky today. First, I went to school and I didn't do my science homework so I was scold to teacher. *** First, I went to school and I didn't do my science homework so my teacher scolded me. Next, I was kicking the ball during I was playing but I fall down. *** Next, I was kicking the ball when I was playing but I fell down. I don't hart but there was a hole in my pants. *** It didn't hurt me but it put a hole in my pants. Third, I almost lost my watch. -correct- I left it in my academy and I found it. -correct- I hope tomorrow will be good day. -correct-