1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-08-27 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Today I wake up at 6'o clock and I played a game for 1 hour. Next our families went to grandparent's house and went to valley and ate lunch and played in the valley. Next we went to grandparent's home again and played a game for 2 hours. Next we went to eat the dinner. dinner was meat. finally we went home and I am doing some homework. I don't want to do homework in evening. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-08-29 답변내용 Hi Daniel, It tells me that you had a well spent weekend. I'm glad to know that you had some good time with your family. About the diary, please review the corrected sentences and remember to use the past tense of the verb when you are retelling a story about your day. Have a good evening. T. Maribel ============================================================================================================================ Today I wake up at 6'o clock and I played a game for 1 hour. -> Today I woke up at 6'o clock and I played a game for 1 hour. Next our families went to grandparent's house and went to valley and ate lunch and played in the valley. -> Next, our family went to grandparents' house then we went to a valley. We ate lunch and played there. Next we went to grandparent's home again and played a game for 2 hours. -> We went back to my grandparents' home again and played a game for 2 hours. Next we went to eat the dinner. dinner was meat. -> We had dinner after that and ate meat. finally we went home and I am doing some homework. -> We finally went home and I did some of my homework. I don't want to do homework in evening. -correct-