1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-08-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 YouTube 내 용 Today I will talk about YouTube. YouTube show us many informations when we type what we want to find. For example, we can find interesting things. Strange animals or death. We can find a game in YouTube. Ufo or movies. I hope I can find what I want in YouTube. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-08-24 답변내용 Hi Daniel, You chose a good subject to talk about. That is nice. To improve your writing skills, please try to avoid sentence fragments. You may put two ideas together to make the sentence longer and bear a complete thought. Keep improving :) Have a good evening. T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about YouTube. -Correct- YouTube show us many informations when we type what we want to find. -> YouTube shows many information about what we are searching for. For example, we can find interesting things. Strange animals or death. -> For example, we can find interesting things like strange animals or death. We can find a game in YouTube. Ufo or movies. -> We can find games in YouTube even videos of UFO and movies. I hope I can find what I want in YouTube. -correct-