1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-08-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 my families 내 용 Today I will talk about my families. First, my father is good at everything. He is good at cooking, fixing some machines, playing with us. Second, my mother is works at home. She cooks, she does laundries, washing dishes. Third is my sister. I don't like her because she cares me so much so I'm so hassle. I think my families have their own trait. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-08-19 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Thank you for talking about your family. I get to know more about them too. About the diary, please study the corrections to improve. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about my families. *** Today, I will talk about my family. First, my father is good at everything. -Correct- He is good at cooking, fixing some machines and playing with us. -Correct- Second, my mother is works at home. *** Second, my mother works at home. She cooks, she does laundries, washing dishes. *** She cooks, wash the laundries and dishes. Third is my sister. -Correct- I don't like her because she cares me so much so I'm so hassle. *** I don't like her because she is always after and I think that's a hassle. I think my families have their own trait. *** I think my family members have their own traits.