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Today I will talk about Grandmother's birthday. Her birthday was last Wednesday. But we had a birthday party on Saturday because many families didn't have time. We meet in a restaurant. In that restaurant, we eat cake, fish, fried food and many other delicious food. My dad celebrate my gradmother's birthday. I hope my birthday is more faster.
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Hi Daniel! I guess everyone was happy on your grandmother's birthday last Wednesday. About the diary, please use the past tense of the verb when you are retelling a story that had finished. Please apply my suggestion next time. Have a good day! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ Today I will talk about Grandmother's birthday. *** Today, I will talk about my grandmother's birthday. Her birthday was last Wednesday. But we had a birthday party on Saturday because many families didn't have time. *** Her birthday was last Wednesday but we celebrated it on Saturday because many of our relatives didn't have the time. We meet in a restaurant. *** We met in a restaurant, In that restaurant, we eat cake, fish, fried food and many other delicious food. *** We ate cake, fish, and many other delicious foods. My dad celebrate my gradmother's birthday. *** My dad hosted my grandmother's birthday. I hope my birthday is more faster. *** I hope my birthday will come sooner.