1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-08-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 animation 내 용 Today I will talk about what animation do I watch. First, I watch one piece. In this animation, main character one to be a king of pirate so main character fight with many pirates. He lost only 2 times and he win all the time. Now, he became very strong. Second is Naruto. Main character want to become general in one country. Now, he became strongest ninja in the country. I hope there is another fun animation that I can see. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-08-03 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in this diary! The flow of your ideas is consistent and clear. Keep it up and study the corrections to continue getting better with your written work. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ======================================================================================================================= Today I will talk about what animation do I watch. -Correct- First, I watch One Piece. -Correct- In this animation, main character one to be a king of pirate so main character fight with many pirates. *** In this animation, the main character wanted to be the pirate King so he fought with many pirates. He lost only 2 times and he win all the time. *** He only lost twice and won almost all the time. Now, he became very strong. -Correct- Second is Naruto. -Correct- Main character want to become general in one country. *** The main character wanted to become the country's general. Now, he became the strongest ninja in the country. -Correct- I hope there is another fun animation that I can see. -Correct-