1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-08-01 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 academy 내 용 This month, many children come to our academy school. First is junhyeok an. He is good at exercise. He is best in our school. Second is mingyeong ji. She is just soso at exercise and studying. There is one more kid but I don't know his name. Today is August first so they will come to our academy. I am really excited. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-08-01 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I am glad to know what made your excited about your academy today. I hope you will be friends with them. About the diary, you were able to write some grammatically correct sentences but please review the corrections to improve. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== This month, many children come to our academy school. *** Many children are coming to our academy this month. First is Junhyeok an. -Correct- *** He is good at exercise. *** He is good at exercising. He is best in our school. *** He is the best in our school. Second is mingyeong ji. - Correct- She is just soso at exercise and studying. *** She is doing quite well at exercising and studying. There is one more kid but I don't know his name. -Correct- Today is August first so they will come to our academy. -Correct- I am really excited. -Correct-