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school
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league of legend
2017-11-11
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The largest chocolate bar
2017-11-07
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changing academy
2017-11-04
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micheal phelps vs great white shark
2017-08-24
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kakao talk
2017-08-10
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youtube
2017-08-06
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league of legend
2017-08-01
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Haikyu
2017-07-20
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school uniform
2017-06-11
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1. vacation Today I will talk about my vacation scheduel. First I woke up and I rest for 1 hour or 1hour 30 minutes. Second, I study till 2'o clock. Third, I rest till 3'o clock. Forth, I go to academy and study math and English till 5:30. Fifth, I rest till 6:50 and go to academy again. Sixth, I study till 8:30 and go home. I take a shower and rest till 11'o clock and I go to sleep. I think I go too many academy still. 2. acadmy's homework. Today I will talk about academy's home work. First I access to internet site. Name is "have English". I study 60 word at week. I litsen some story at that site and solve questions. Math homework is solving 20 questions at one day and solving many questions at 2days or 4days. I hope my homework decrease.
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Hi Daniel! Thank you for writing the diaries. However, please review the corrections deeply to improve your written work. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ************************************************************************************************************************ 1. vacation Today I will talk about my vacation scheduel. >> Today, I will talk about my vacation schedule. First I woke up and I rest for 1 hour or 1hour 30 minutes. >> First, I woke up and I rested for an hour or 1 hour, 30 minutes. Second, I study till 2'o clock. >> Second, I studied unil 2 o'clock. Third, I rest till 3'o clock. >> Then, I rested until 3 o'clock. Forth, I go to academy and study math and English till 5:30. >> Fourth, I went to the academy and studied Math and English until 5:30 pm. Fifth, I rest till 6:50 and go to academy again. >> Fifth, I rested until 6:50 and went to academy again. Sixth, I study till 8:30 and go home. >> Sixth, I studied until 8:30 and went home. I take a shower and rest till 11'o clock and I go to sleep. >> I took a shower and rested until 11:00 then I went to sleep. I think I go too many academy still. >> I think I still have too many academies. 2. acadmy's homework. (Academy homework) Today I will talk about academy's home work. >> Today, I will talk about my academy home work. First I access to internet site. >> First, I need to access the website. Name is "have English". >> The site is called "Have English" I study 60 word at week. >> I have to study 60 words per week. I litsen some story at that site and solve questions. >> I listen to some stories in the sire and answer the questions. Math homework is solving 20 questions at one day and solving many questions at 2days or 4days. >> I need to solve 20 questions in my Math homework in one day. I hope my homework decrease. >> I hope my homework is less.