1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-07-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 dark sward 내 용 Today I played dark sward. It had no events but it was fun. We need sprit to select some items. There is many items. sward, earings, rings, clothes. I have very good earings. It called thunder ring. It is unique item. I will use it when I become stronger. I hope I can choose more thunder item. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-07-19 답변내용 Hi Daniel! You made me interested about the game. Good job! Please study the corrected sentences to improve. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I played dark sward. *** Today, I played dark sword. It had no events but it was fun. -Correct- We need sprit to select some items. -Correct- There is many items. sward, earings, rings, clothes. *** There are many items like sword, earrings, rings and clothes. I have very good earings. *** I have powerful earrings. It called thunder ring. *** It is called the thunder ring. It is unique item. *** It is a unique item. I will use it when I become stronger. -Correct- I hope I can choose more thunder items. -Correct-