1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-07-15 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 maplestory 내 용 Today I will talk about maplestory's patch. Maplestory make fifth skill. I'm really excited about it. Also, screen become different. Screen become easily. Third, we can level up easily because experience point become lower. I hope I can level up more easily and make one character 200 level. I want to make it. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-07-15 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Thank you for writing a diary. Please review the corrected sentences to improve. I know you can improve in writing your sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about maplestory's patch. *** Today, I will talk about the maple story partch. Maplestory make fifth skill. *** Maple story has made some advancements. I'm really excited about it. -Correct- Also, screen become different. *** The screen has changed. Screen become easily. *** It looks better. Third, we can level up easily because experience point becomes lower. -Correct- I hope I can level up more easily and make one character 200 level. -Correct- I want to make it. -Correct-