1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-07-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 amusement park 내 용 Today I will talk about Korea's amusement park. FIrst, there is a everland. Everland is in young in. In there, there is many scary rides. For example, there is T-express, let's twist, thunder force. Second, there is Lotte world. There is many funny and scary rides. For example, there is Bungee drop, comet express. Third, there is E world. There is many fun rides. For example, there is viking and tambarine. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-07-12 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in writing about the amusement parks in your country. Please continue to enhance your writing skills by reviewing the correct sentences below. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ Today I will talk about Korea's amusement park. -Correct- First, there is a everland. *** First, there is Everland. Everland is in Young in. -Correct- In there, there is many scary rides. *** They have many thrilling rides. For example, there is T-express, let's twist, thunder force. -Correct- Second, there is Lotte world. *** Second is the Lotte World. There is many funny and scary rides. *** There are many scary but fun rides. For example, there is Bungee drop, comet express. -Correct- Third, there is E world. -Correct- There is many fun rides. *** There are many fun rides. For example, there is Viking and Tambourine. -Correct-