1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-07-05 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 3diaries 내 용 1.dodgeball Today I will talk about my dodgeball skill. I was good at dodgeball. But nowadays, I think my dodgebal skill is become little lower. I was good at catching it but when I catch it, ball comes out from my hands. I hope I become good at dodgeball again. 2.test Thursday is final test. I am studying very hard. I think math and english is 100 and social study, science, korean is 90 to 100. I will study wrong thing from my books. I hope I will have a good point. 3.family Today I will say my family. First my dad is very scary. When he is scary, he sometimes hit me. But when dad is not angry, he is very funny. Second, mom is very funny but also when she is angry, she hit me. But I think mom is not so scary. Third, I have my sister. I don't like her because me and my sister's personality is very different. I think my family is unique. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-07-05 답변내용 Hi Daniel! You were able to write about three different topics. However, please look into the corrected sentences and learn more how to write better sentences. Have a good evening! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== 1.dodgeball Today I will talk about my dodgeball skill. *** Today I will talk about my Dodge ball skills. But nowadays, I think my dodgebal skill is become little lower. *** But nowadays, I think that I am losing my skills. I hope I become good at dodgeball again. *** I hope that I will be good at Dodge ball again. 2.test Thursday is final test. *** The final test is on Thursday. I will study wrong thing from my books. *** I will study the corrections from my books. I hope I will have a good point. *** I hope to get good scores. 3.family Today I will say my family. *** Today, I will talk about my family. When he is scary, he sometimes hit me. *** He sometimes hit me when he is angry. Second, mom is very funny but also when she is angry, she hit me. *** Second, my mom is very funny but she also hits me when she is angry. I don't like her because me and my sister's personality is very different. *** I don't like her because her personality is very different from mine.