1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-06-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 snail 내 용 Today I will talk about new pet. Today my sister's friend's mom give a snail. My sister name it lettuce and cupcake. I think my sister is like kid. Snail it lettuce or fruit. My mom said it would die after one wick. I hope snail won't die. I hope I have a dog for a new pet. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-06-24 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Thank you for writing about your new pet. Your mom is right. Snails don't live that long and I hope that they would live longer. The idea was clearly conveyed in the diary but please look into the corrections to learn how the sentences should be correctly written. Have a good evening! T.Maribel ================================================================================================================================ Today I will talk about new pet. *** Today, I will talk about our new pet. Today my sister's friend's mom give a snail. *** The sister of my mom's friend gave 2 snails. My sister name it lettuce and cupcake. *** My sister named them Lettuce and Cupcake. I think my sister is like a kid. -Correct- Snail it lettuce or fruit. *** Snail eats lettuce or fruit. My mom said it would die after one wick. *** My mom said it will die after a week. I hope the snails won't die. -Correct- I hope I have a dog for a new pet. -Correct-