1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-06-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 5 diaries 내 용 1.Maroon 5's song Today I will talk about Maroon 5's songs. Especially, I like Maps, Payphone, Sugar, This love, Feeling, One more night, Animals and Lucky stike. I heard Maroon 5's song when I play Maplestory or play bomb it. When I become born when I play games or fight with enemy, I heard Maroon 5's music because his music is very exciting. I hope I find more exciting music. 2. You tube Today I watch You tube. I especially watch many program's of Heopop. His name is Heo Jae One. He born in 1988 year June 4th. He tries many things. For example, he tries to make 5m slide in his house or making his house field with 1000 ballons. I think he is trying very funny things. I hope he tries more funny things. 3. Basketball Today I played with my friends. I played Basketball and ride a bycycle. We played a tournament. Basketball tournament. I was third ranking. When I lost, I ride a bycycle for 10 minutes. It was very fun. I played with my friends for one hour and I went home. I hope I can play more long times with friends. 4. Watch Today I buy a new watch. It is very hard to use. There is a many function. First, it is flashlight. When we push reverse. We can use flashlight. Second, we can use stop watch. If we push mode one time and push forward one time, we can use stop watch. There is Aralm to. I think this is very hard to use but if we memorize this perfectly, I think it is very good watch. 5.dodgeball Today I played a dodgeball. I have little power so I can't throw well but I can throw where I want. I can aim well. I aim leg so many friends can't dodge my ball. Next I can catch well. I can dodge very well. My eyes can watch where is ball and I can dodge well or catch it well. Finally, I can't catch a long pass. I think I have to grow my power. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-06-20 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in writing these diaries. Please look into the corrected sentences to learn more. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ 1.Maroon 5's song Corrections: When I become born when I play games or fight with enemy, I heard Maroon 5's music because his music is very exciting. *** I listen to Maroon 5's song when I get bored while playing video games. 2. You tube Corrections: Today I watch You tube. *** Today, I watched YouTube. He born in 1988 year June 4th. He tries many things. *** He was born in June 4, 1988 I think he is trying very funny things. *** I think he is trying to do funny things.*** 3. Basketball Corrections: I played Basketball and ride a bycycle. *** I played basketball and rode a bicycle. *** We played a tournament. Basketball tournament. *** We had a basketball tournament *** I was third ranking. *** I was third in ranking *** I hope I can play more long times with friends. *** I hope I have much longer time to play with my friends *** 4. Watch Corrections: Today I buy a new watch. ***Today, I bought a new watch*** There is a many function. *** It has many functions. *** There is Aralm to. *** It has an alam too. *** 5.dodgeball Corrections: I have little power so I can't throw well but I can throw where I want. *** I feel a little weak so I can't throw well but I can throw wherever I want. I think I have to grow my power. *** I think I have to gain more strength. ***