1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-06-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 5 diary 내 용 1. finding blue Today I played a funny game. It is cellphone game. It is fighting game. It is little hard but funny. We must find a blue man and kill a blue man. We can use a stick bomb, spear bomb, shotgun, pistol, rifle and machine gun. When we use gun and use white man or animal, we have minus point. I think it needs lots of control. 2.math test I had math test on May 23rd. It was just so so. I solved 24 question but I can't solved 1 question so I pick just one number. When I saw a result, it was very good. 22 question is correct and 3 question was wrong. I was a top score in Andong. I think because it was a hard test. I hope I had a good score like this in final test. 3. diary 2 Today I ate meat in restaurant. I walked into the restaurant because it take only 10 minutes to arrive in restaurant. My dad roast meat and mushroom. I like salty thing so I spread salt one piece when I ate mushroom and meat. Of course salt was very little. I think it was right to my body. My dad ate cold noodles to so I ate only one time. When I come out, there was a candy. I take one candy and ate it. I will go there again. 4. IQ test Today I take IQ test. It takes 20 minutes to do it. I also take aptitude test together. The result was good. My IQ was 139. I think it is high. Aptitude is job. My aptitude was pharmacist. My parents said it is nice job. I hope my aptitude is really right in this job. If I like this job in future, I will study and become a pharmacist. 5. bycycle Today I will talk about my bycycle. My bycycle is black cat. My parents said it is very expensive thing so when I use black cat, be careful. I learned how to ride a bycycle when I was first grade. I ride two wheel bycycle when I was first grade. I change my bycycle when I was second grade. I change it to black cat in sixth grade. I ho[e I can change it to new one and better bycycle soon. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-06-20 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in writing those diaries. Kindly review the corrections. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ================================================== 1. finding blue *** All the sentences were correctly written*** 2.math test Corrections: I had math test on May 23rd. *** I had a Math test on May 23rd *** It was just so so. *** It was okay*** 22 question is correct and 3 question was wrong. *** Out of 25 questions, 22 were correct and only 3 were wrong. I was a top score in Andong. *** I got the top score in Andong*** 3. diary 2 Corrections: I think it was right to my body. ***I think it was right for my body*** I take one candy and ate it. *** I took one candy and ate it*** 4. IQ test Today I take IQ test. *** Today, I took an IQ test. *** 5. bicycle ----> bicycle Today I will talk about my bycycle. *** Today, I will talk about my bicycle.***