1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-06-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 5 diary 내 용 1. diary Today I had bad accident. First my friend was playing a yo-yo. He said he was very good at that. But he make one mistake. He was playing yo-yo but he raise up his hands so high so his yo-yo hit his head. His forehead was ripped so he went to the doctor's office right away. I hope his forehead get back soon. 2. diary 2 Today I had one more bad accident. I heard it when I was measuring my flexibility and my hand's grip strength. My friend did a sexual molestation and he have to go to another school. But he next day he was still in our school. I think it was very bad accident but I was relax that he didn't go to another school. 3. studying Today I studied about our last tests. It was very hard when I studied the social study first. But now I can memorize social study more better. It is still hard in other part. I only studied one unit. I will study more unit and I hope I have a good point in this time. I hope I can have 100 point. 4. diary 3 Today I change my pair. I sit in front of my one best friend and one more kind friend. My pair is Kim Nayeon. I think this pair is better than before. In my left there is one more my friend. I think I can have fun until I change my sit and pair. I hope next time I have more better pair. 5. Korean's history Today I will talk about Korean's history. Gojoseon was first Koreay's country. Next Gojoseon was destroyed because of war. Next three country govern our land. It is Silla, Baekje. Goguryeo. Next Silla unificated Silla, Baekje. It made a Goryeo. I think our country was changed many times. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-06-17 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Good job in practicing your writing skills. You were able to make a good number of correct sentences but don't forget to review the corrections on the diaries. Keep striving to become better. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ 1. diary Today I had bad accident. First my friend was playing a yo-yo. He said he was very good at that. But he make one mistake. He was playing yo-yo but he raise up his hands so high so his yo-yo hit his head. His forehead was ripped so he went to the doctor's office right away. I hope his forehead get back soon. Corrections: Today I had bad accident. *** A bad accident happened today. But he make one mistake. *** He made a mistake I hope his forehead get back soon. *** I hope his forehead will be healed soon 2. diary 2 Today I had one more bad accident. I heard it when I was measuring my flexibility and my hand's grip strength. My friend did a sexual molestation and he have to go to another school. But he next day he was still in our school. I think it was very bad accident but I was relax that he didn't go to another school. Corrections: Today I had one more bad accident. *** Another bad incident happened today. My friend did a sexual molestation and he have to go to another school. *** My friend did a sexual molestation and he had to go to another school. Accident vs. incident accident - a bad situation causing injury or damage incident - an event that caused disturbance 3. studying Today I studied about our last tests. It was very hard when I studied the social study first. But now I can memorize social study more better. It is still hard in other part. I only studied one unit. I will study more unit and I hope I have a good point in this time. I hope I can have 100 point. Corrections: Today I studied about our last tests. *** Today I studied for our last test. But now I can memorize social study more better. *** But now, I am much better in memorizing things about Social Studies. I hope I can have 100 point. *** I hope I can get 100 points. 4. diary 3 Today I change my pair. I sit in front of my one best friend and one more kind friend. My pair is Kim Nayeon. I think this pair is better than before. In my left there is one more my friend. I think I can have fun until I change my sit and pair. I hope next time I have more better pair. Corrections: Today I change my pair. *** Today, my seatmate was changed. My pair is Kim Nayeon. *** My seatmate is Kim Nayeon I think this pair is better than before. *** I think it is better. I think I can have fun until I change my sit and pair. *** I think I can have fun until I my seatmate is changed again. I hope next time I have more better pair. *** I hope to have a much better seatmate next time. 5. Korean's history Today I will talk about Korean's history. Gojoseon was first Koreay's country. Next Gojoseon was destroyed because of war. Next three country govern our land. It is Silla, Baekje. Goguryeo. Next Silla unificated Silla, Baekje. It made a Goryeo. I think our country was changed many times. Corrections: Today I will talk about Korean's history. *** Today, I will talk about Korea's history. Next three country govern our land. *** Then, three countries governed our land. I think our country was changed many times. *** I think my country went through a lot of changes.