1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-04-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 my smartphone 내 용 Today I will talk about my smartphone. My smartphone is very strange. It's battery is really small so when we use small time, we can't use it anymore because my smartphone's battery is too little. My smartphone's background screen is Naruto's four wheel eye. I think it is very wonderful. My phone's game is seven knights. Finally I have 6:00 alarm. I think I woke up so early. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-04-29 답변내용 Hi Daniel! You are lucky to have a smartphone at an early age. I had mine when I was in my late 20's. Please use your smartphone the right way so it will not put you in trouble with anybody. About the diary, there are more correct sentences this time! Please review the corrected sentences to improve. Have a great weekend! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ Today I will talk about my smartphone. -Correct- My smartphone is very strange. -Correct- It's battery is really small so when we use small time, we can't use it anymore because my smartphone's battery is too little. *** It has a small battery and it doesn't last for a long time. My smartphone's background screen is Naruto's four wheel eye. -Correct- I think it is very wonderful. -Correct- My phone's game is seven knights. -Correct- Finally I have 6:00 alarm. *** Finally, I set the alarm at 6:00 I think I woke up so early. -Correct-