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2016-03-23
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Today I went to youngduc. In there, I catch crab in there but I can't catch crab because there was no crab in there. Everyone can't catch it. Next, I go to the aquarium. There was many kind of fish in there. I want to see more big kinds of fish because I like big thing. Next we go to home. When we go home, we went to the restaurant and eat fish cake, stir fried rice cake and big crab. I hope I go to youngduc and catch some crabs.
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Hi Daniel! I think I will also like Youngduc because I like catching crabs too. Try to go back there! About the diary, please review the corrected sentences and learn them well. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ============================================================================================================================= Today I went to Youngduc. (Correct) In there, I catch crab in there but I can't catch crab because there was no crab in there. *** Usually, there are many crabs there but I didn't catch one because there was no crab at all. Everyone can't catch it. *** No one was able to catch it. Next, I go to the aquarium. *** Next, I went to the aquarium. There was many kind of fish in there. *** There were many kinds of fishes in there. I want to see more big kinds of fish because I like big fish. (Correct) Next we go to home. When we go home, we went to the restaurant and eat fish cake, stir fried rice cake and big crab. *** Then, we went home. But we went to a restaurant first and ate fish cake, stir fried rice and big crab. I hope I go to Youngduc again and catch some crabs. (Correct)