1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-02-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 naruto 6 내 용 Today I will talk about the comic naruto. Naruto, souske and madara was fighting. souske and naruto is one team. Naruto and souske kill madara but caguya appear. Caguya is one of the strongest gods. Naruto, kakasi, sakura, souske beat caguya and war is all finish and every viliage never war again. Naruto make a peace. Every ninja never fight. I think next time, it will be a ending and naruto become adult. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-02-04 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Your sentences are improving but take note of the following corrections. A. Proper nouns such as names should have a capital beginning letter. B. Don't forget to use the articles a, an, and the on your sentences when needed. Have a good day! T. Maribel =================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about the comic Naruto. (Correct) Naruto, souske and madara was fighting. *** Naruto, Souske and Madara were fighting. Souske and Naruto is one team. (Correct) Naruto and souske kill madara but caguya appear. *** Naruto and Souske killed Madara, then, Caguya appeared. Caguya is one of the strongest gods. (Correct) Naruto, kakasi, sakura, souske beat caguya and war is all finish and every viliage never war again. *** Naruto, Kakasi, Sakura, Souska beat Caguya and the war was over. Every village didn't go to a war again. Naruto make a peace. *** Naruto brought peace. Every ninja never fight. *** Every ninja doesn't fight with each other anymore. I think next time, it will be a ending and Naruto becomes an adult.