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Today I will talk about the comic naruto. Fianally madara start the war. Madara make a many kind of army. First, jets. Second, yatogonsang army. Finally, Madara. Jets is white person and when it die, it become a tree. Second, yatogonsang is make dead people becme real people. Souske's brother was become yatogonsang. Madara can use eyes of movement and kaleioscope saryunan both of them. When naruto's teacher kakasie fight with madara, madara's mask broken and madara was Obito was kakasi's friend and obito give saryunan to kakasi. Obito become bad person like madara. real madara kill almost all people in battlefeld. Madara make all monster become one. It become strong monster. madara pilot monste and souske come to viliage and he help naruto. Naruto become strnger in war. he become all monster's friend. Souske have eyes of movement. Naruto can use god's power and souske can use god's eye. I think they finally fight with madara next time.
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Hi Daniel! Thank you for always sharing about Naruto. I don't have to watch him on the internet anymore because you always share Naruto's story. Points to remember: 1. The first letter in the proper noun should be in capital. (Naruto) 2. Review the spelling of words. (finally, kaleidoscope, etc.) 3. Use the tenses of the verb correctly. You can use the past tense of the verb in retelling a story. Have a good night! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about the comic Naruto. (Correct) Fianally madara start the war. *** Finally, Madara started the war. Madara make a many kind of army. *** Madara made various armies. First, jets. Second, Yatogonsang army. (Correct) Finally, Madara. (Correct) Jets is white person and when it die, it become a tree. *** Jets is a white person and it becomes a tree once it dies. Second, yatogonsang is make dead people becme real people. *** Second, Yatogonsang can make dead people alive again. Souske's brother was become yatogonsang. *** Souske's brother became Yatogonsang. Madara can use eyes of movement and kaleioscope saryunan both of them. *** Madara can use both eye movements and Kaleidoscope Saryunan. When naruto's teacher kakasie fight with madara, madara's mask broken and madara was Obito was kakasi's friend and obito give saryunan to kakasi. *** What Kakasie, Naruto's teacher fought with Madara, his mask was broken but Obito gave Saryunan to Kakasi. Obito become bad person like madara. *** Obito turned into a bad person like Madara. Real madara killed almost all the people in battlefield. (Correct) Madara made all the monsters become one. (Correct) It become strong monster. *** It became a strong monster. madara pilot monste and souske come to viliage and he help naruto. *** Madara's pilot monster and Souske came to the village and helped Naruto. Naruto become strnger in war. *** Naruto became stronger in the war. he become all monster's friend. *** He became a friend to all the monsters. Souske have eyes of movement. *** Souske has a powerful eye movement. Naruto can use God's power and Souske can use god's eye. (Correct) I think they finally fight with madara next time. *** I think they will fight with Madara next time.