1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-01-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 naruto 3 내 용 Today I will talk about the comic naruto. Naruto's teacher kakasi hurt when he did a mission. Naruto have new teacher yamato. He went to mission and he meet souske but souske become so stronger so naruto can do nothing. Naruto went home and he trained new skills. First, spiral shuriken. Second, mode good die young. Spiral shuriken is very strong. It is spiral lllusion's shuriken mode. When we be shot by spiral shuriken, energy's line is cut and we can't use energy and almost person die. mode good die young is strong. When we use mode good die young, we did't hurt so much and we can know far away things. When people who come to catch naruto's monster, naruto use spiral shuriken and mode good die young so naruto kill them. I think naruto become stronger and stronger. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-02-01 답변내용 Hi Daniel! I can tell that you like Naruto very much. Good job in sharing what you know about Naruto but please study the corrected sentences so you will improve. Have a good night! T. Maribel =============================================================================================================================== Today I will talk about the comic Naruto. (Correct) Naruto's teacher kakasi hurt when he did a mission. *** Naruto's teacher, Kakasi was hurt when he did a mission. Naruto have new teacher yamato. *** Naruto has a new teacher, Yamato. He went to mission and he meet souske but souske become so stronger so naruto can do nothing. *** He went to a mission and he met Souske but Souske became so much stronger so Naruto can do nothing. Naruto went home and he trained new skills. (Correct) First, spiral shuriken. (Correct) Second, mode good die young. -------> What is mode good die young? Spiral shuriken is very strong. (Correct) It is spiral lllusion's shuriken mode. *** It is a spiral's illusion of Shuriken mode. When we be shot by spiral shuriken, energy's line is cut and we can't use energy and almost person die. *** When we are hit by the spiral Shuriken, the person's energy line is lost and can lead to death. mode good die young is strong. ------------> (What is mode good die young?) When we use mode good die young, we did't hurt so much and we can know far away things. *** When we use this technique, we won't hurt so much and we can know far away things. When people who come to catch naruto's monster, naruto use spiral shuriken and mode good die young so naruto kill them. *** When people try to catch Naruto's monster, he will use his special powers to kill his enemies. I think naruto become stronger and stronger. *** I think Naruto has become a lot stronger.