1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-01-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 naruto 내 용 Today I will talk about comic naruto. Naruto is ninja. He was very not good at ninja but he saw that someone one of the another ninja believe him and he become stronger. His best friend is souske. He was stronger than naruto but naruto become stronger and souske become hate naruto. Naruto and souske fight. Naruto have very many energy and souske have many energy in his eyes. He can se Naruto's energy and souske win. I think souske's eyes are to strong. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-01-25 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing about Naruto. I have learned something about Naruto and Souske because of your diary. Please review the correct sentences so you will improve. Have a good evening! T. Maribel ========================================================================================================================= Today I will talk about comic naruto. *** Today I will talk about the comic Naruto. Naruto is ninja. *** Naruto is a ninja. He was very not good at ninja but he saw that someone one of the another ninja believe him and he become stronger. *** He was not a very good ninja but another ninja believed in him so he became stronger. His best friend is Souske. (Correct) He was stronger than naruto but naruto become stronger and souske become hate naruto. *** He was stronger than Naruto but Naruto became stronger and Souske started to hate Naruto. Naruto and souske fight. *** Naruto and Souske fought. Naruto have very many energy and souske have many energy in his eyes. *** Naruto have a lot of energy but Souske more energy in his eyes. He can se Naruto's energy and souske win. *** He can see Naruto's energy and Souske won. I think souske's eyes are too strong. (Correct)