1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2016-01-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Today I will talk about what was I did in my house. First, I was wake up at 7:42. Next, I studied for 1 hour 18 minutes and I go to hospital because I am sick. Third, I went home again and studied for 3 hours 30 minutes. Next, I ate lunch and go to Takewondow school. Next, I came home at 3:30 and studied for 1 hour 20 minutes and play game for 1 hour 40 minutes. I played mapelstory. Next I talked with teacher for ten minutes and I ply game for 20 minutes and I rest at home and sleep at 10:30. I think I study so much. I want to rest more time. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2016-01-21 답변내용 Hi Daniel! Thank you for writing about your busy day. Please review the correct sentences so you will improve. Remember to use the correct tense of the verb. In this diary, the past tense of the verb should be used because you are retelling a story or a situation that already happened. Have a good night! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================ Today I will talk about what was I did in my house. *** Today I will talk about what I did in my house. First, I was wake up at 7:42. *** First, I woke up at 7:42 am. Next, I studied for 1 hour 18 minutes and I go to hospital because I am sick. *** Next, I studied for 1 hour 18 minutes and I went to hospital because I was sick. Third, I went home again and studied for 3 hours 30 minutes. Next, I ate lunch and go to Takewondow school. *** Third, I went home again and studied for 3 hours 30 minutes. Next, I ate lunch and went to Takewondo school. Next, I came home at 3:30 and studied for 1 hour 20 minutes and play game for 1 hour 40 minutes. I played mapelstory. *** Next, I came home at 3:30 and studied for 1 hour 20 minutes and played a game for 1 hour 40 minutes. I played maple story. Next I talked with my teacher for ten minutes and I played game for 20 minutes and I rest at home and sleep at 10:30. *** Then, I talked with my teacher for 10 minutes and I played game for 20 minutes and I rested at home and slept at 10:30. I think I study so much. I want to rest more time. *** I think I study too much. I want to have more time to rest.