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Today I will talk about saudi arabia's women treatment. In saudi arabia, women can't do what they wanted. They must take one male relative when women go outside. Also women can't drive and women can't vote. I think women must really upset in saudi arabia but Abdulah bin Abdulaziz changed the law. Now women can go outside, drive, vote. I think women are more easy to live in saudi arabia.
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Hi Daniel! It's good to read a diary from you. Good job! There are some corrections on the sentences so please study them. Also, women in Saudi Arabia are not yet allowed to legally drive and go out without a male relative as a companion. However, let's hope that things will start to change in that country as to how they treat their women. Have a good night! T. Maribel ================================================================================================================================= Today I will talk about saudi arabia's women treatment. *** Today, I will talk about Saudi Arabia's treatment on women. In saudi arabia, women can't do what they wanted. *** In Saudi Arabia, women can't what they want. They must take one male relative when women go outside. (Correct) Also women can't drive and women can't vote. (Correct) I think women must really upset in saudi arabia but Abdulah bin Abdulaziz changed the law. *** I think they must be really upset about their situation but King Abdullah bin Abdulaziz changed the law. Now women can go outside, drive, vote. I think women are more easy to live in saudi arabia. *** Now, women can vote. I think women will start to live a better life in Saudi Arabia.