1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 MERS out break 내 용 Today I will talk about MERS outbreak. After May 20th, 36 people died because of the Mers. At July 28th, Mers is finish. I think now we are safe. Now Korean people safe so people have a safe position. Now, who travel korea is many. At july 28th' rusia, vietnam, china and 7country say that Korea is safe. I so happy that Korea is safe now. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-27 답변내용 Today I will talk about MERS outbreak. ===> Good sentence! After May 20th, 36 people died because of the Mers. ===> After May 20, 36 people died because of MERS. At July 28th, Mers is finish. ===> On July 28, MERS was gone. I think now we are safe. ===> Good sentence! Now Korean people safe so people have a safe position. ===> Now, Korean people are safe and they feel safe. Now, who travel korea is many. ===> Now, many people travel to Korea.  At july 28th' rusia, vietnam, china and 7country say that Korea is safe. ===> On July 20, Russia, Vietnam, China and other 7countires say that Korea is safe.  I so happy that Korea is safe now. ===> I am so happy that Korea is safe now! Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing a great news about Korea. I am happy as well! Regarding your grammar, remember to capitalize the first letter of countries, be mindful of acronyms and verbs. Hope to hear another great news! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella