1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 glass on mars 내 용 Today I will talk about a glass that spoted on mars. Mars is very similar with earth. Because mars is a planet that can people or animal can live. It is most similar with earth. In mars, a glass spoted. It show that animal live at thier. It says impact glass. It look like dark brown. When asteroid and comet crash, impact glass made. I think space have many mysterious things. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-25 답변내용 Today I will talk about a glass that spoted on mars. ===> Today I will talk about a glass that was spotted on Mars.  Mars is very similar with earth. Because mars is a planet that can people or animal can live. ===> Mars is very similar to Earth because people and animals can live on Mars as well. It is most similar with earth. ===> Good sentence! In mars, a glass spoted. ===> On Mars, a glass was spotted.  It show that animal live at thier. ===> It shows that animal lived there. It says impact glass. ===> Good sentence! It look like dark brown. ===> It is dark brown. When asteroid and comet crash, impact glass made. ===> When an asteroid and a comet crashed, an impact glass is made.  I think space have many mysterious things. ===> Good sentence! Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing about the article. You were able to construct the sentences well. However, slips were still noticed with verbs and capitalization. Thus, review the corrections. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella